Project 1-Rough cut peer feedback

Stephen-

Does it make narrative sense?
- Yes, although much doesn't happen the voice over shows clearly whats going on.

Do the special effects fit well with the sequence? Can it be improved?
-The walking into wall shot works really well with how the shot fades in and out. Also the last effects works well with having the same colour shot as the jumper.

Is the dialogue engaging?
- Yes and it goes with the music and shots well, especially when the voice over says ' I am felix"

What do the sound FX, ambient sounds and music add?
- The music adds tension and sits with the way the shots cut and footsteps in shot 2.

Is it entertaining?
- Yes it works as a really good intro

What would you do to improve the sequence?
- A couple of shots look a different colour to others, could be colour corrected.


Rory-

Does it make narrative sense?
- Yes, its very easy to follow and makes sense

Do the special effects fit well with the sequence? How could they be improved?
- Yes they fit in well and they look very well done.

Is the dialogue engaging?
-Yes, it's intriguing and interesting to listen too.

What do the sound FX, ambient sounds and music add?
- The music adds great tone to the sequence and gives a good pace to the rest of the scene.

Is it entertaining?
-It is very entertaining

What would you do to improve the sequence?
-Colour correct.