Joshua Vallely-
As a whole each shot that has been composed within the sequence of story boards does narratively make sense and is very clear/easy to follow. Regarding special effects within the sequence none that i know of has been clearly made in the story board. The dialogue within the sequence is a little engaging, with more tone it will be more engaging and keep the viewer interested but as a whole it is good. I personally think that there are a couple of shots that seem too long ( Shot 1 and shot 3) The sequence itself could be improved by, perhaps add some examples of powers from other students when filming rather than talking about just the main characters powers (show some examples) The technical quality of the animatic could be improved by using more movement because the animatics of each shot seems a little stiff.
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